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My Little Murderers

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Ponies may die.
There are graphic scenes.
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A rumor spread around equestria that new ponies were coming to town. They called themselves the Black Roses. Twilight read up on them and it said they were bad luck. They travelled from town to town. Applejack said they should give them a chance. Pinkie Pie offered to throw them a welcoming party. Rainbow Dash wanted to kick their asses. Rarity wanted nothing to do with them. Fluttershy just wanted to stay away from the mean ones, but she said if they were nice maybe she could- no..yes maybe she would make friends with them.

It took the gang two days to finally happen upon the tiny town. They all walked out of the Everfree Forest. One of them sniffing the ground along the way. Another holding a book out in front of her to read directions. There were 7 in all. One of them floated above the others, scoping out the area. It seemed there were no ponies here. They didn't know that everypony was inside. Locked their doors too.

"I-I don't think this town..hmm...maybe everyone went to dinner?" Becky Books muttered, with her book in the way of her face. The light brown pony was smart. She loved to read, but you could never get her to do anything else. she also had lighter brown almost white fur splotches all over her. Her hair done up in nice braids, she pushed her glasses up again, because they slipped.

"This town ain't nothin. Let's breeze through here like we always do." Tally Mark said a bit too loud. This pony was disturbed in the mind, her cutie mark was tally marks that people drew on walls of jail cells. She hated her life and everypony elses. She was not a nice companion. Her neon green highlighted purple hair was teased always. And she had a huge bow on her tail.

"Well it smells nice. There seems to be a lot of animals here too. Eeeuhg I smelled a skunk as well." Woofia said. Woofia was raised in a forest off somewhere else. Her parents dropped her off there and left her. A pack of wild dogs found her and almost ate her, but raised her instead. As a filly almost completely a wild animal she was found and raised in society, but she still holds the ways of the dog in her heart, and is often found doing dog-like things.

"Well I can't see anyone from up here! Nope nope nope! I guess they all left. Where do you think they went? Ooooh what about a nice carnival? That would be so fun. OMIGOSH A BUTTERFLY!" Bumble Bea buzzed on in chitter chatter like she always does. Her fascination for bugs annoys everypony around her. Mostly Tally Mark though. Her tail resembled a bee's stinger and she loves to make annoying buzzing sounds when she's bored. She's only a filly though. Not nearly grown up yet.

Tulip said nothing. Tulip Tarry was a shy mute pony, and she rarely ever talked. She loves gardening and taking care of flowers. She's like a plant whisperer. She doesn't like animals too much. She hates bugs too. Except for butterflies and ladybugs. Other then that, and she's running away screaming.

"Well. I hope this town at least has good music. The last town we went to only had harmonicas." Gwen Guitar beemed out. She had a love for music, but especially the electric guitar. She was great at it. She had just hated towns with no music. They bored her to death. She was also a proud pony, and gloats alot. Feeling she's better then anypony.

"Now now. We cannot express our feelings in such a harsh manner. Ye shall always follow thy rules by the book. Right Becky?" Becky nodded in response to Quil, a poetry pony. She spoke in old language all of the time. And had to correct grammar. She hates wrong spelling and pronunciation. She especially hates the word 'ain't'

Fluttershy watched out the Cake's shop with Pinkie Pie and the others, watching those interesting ponies walk by. She thought they seemed nice, but not too nice...

"W-what are we going to do..?" Fluttershy asked Twilight.
"We could see what they want maybe?" She responded.
"No no no, that would be horrible. What if they eat you?" Spike interupted, he didn't like the look of Tally Mark.
"They wont eat you." Twilight chuckled.
"Enough of this chit chatter! Ah'm gonna talk to 'em" Applejack walked out the door and stood in front of the group of ponies.

"Well hello there! Ah'm Applejack. Who are you ponies?" Applejack smiled.
"I'm Quil, deary. This is Bumble Bea, the one in the air. Tally Mark, the one with an attitude. Becky, the one who is obsessed over books. Gwen, the music lover. Woofia, the wild one. And Tulip the quiet one." Quil curtsied, and Applejack raised an eyebrow.
"Weeell alright then! Nice to meet ya'll."
"And a pleasure to you as well, hun. Do you care to tell why everypony is gone this evening?"
"Oh ah..Well. They is ah' scared of yah. No offence."
"None taken I'm sure."
"I could show you my friends though." Applejack waved to the Cake's bakery, and out came Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Twilight, Fluttershy, and Rarity. With Spike on her back of course. And the cutie mark crusaders were following close behind with curiousity.

"Guys, these are the Black Roses. And their nice too." Applejack assured her group of friends. Tulip looked worried, but Tally Mark nodded in assurence. All would go well.

Pinkie Pie walked up to Bumble Bea, or rather, walked under her.
"What are you doing?" Pinkie asked.
"Looking for bugs." Bumble Bea replied.
"why?"
"Your face."
"ouch." Pinkie walked the other way with a grimace on her face. Were these ponies nice or not?

Rarity was having a conversation with Quil about dresses and old music, old poetry, and nice art. Pinkie Pie was following Bumble Bea around. Fluttershy was talking to Tulip, or rather talking to a wall, since Tulip never responded to anything. Rainbow Dash was watching Tally Mark, and Tally Mark was watching her back. Twilight was speaking to Becky Books about the book she was reading. Applejack and the CMC (cutie mark crusaders) were talking to Woofia, and asking about her cutie mark. Gwen hung out next to Quil and Twilight, half interested in what they had to say.

"Hey ah' got an idea!" Applejack said. "Ya'll can stay in my barn! I know it don't sound too good, but I love the idea of a sleepover. And yall seem like a nice bunch!"

They all agreed and went to her barn. Rarity brought blankets and pillows, Twilight brought a few mattresses. Pinkie Pie brought the food, and Rainbow Dash sat and watched. Applejack set up the barn to look nice, and everyone talked until they fell asleep.

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Applejack woke up to whimpering. She couldn't move. She looked around the room, expecting a barn. But she saw the everfree forest. She was bound to a tree and gagged. It looked like all her friends were too. In a sort of circle. Her ankles were sore, and so was her head, being it was also tied to the tree. She saw all her friends had the same prediciment. The Black Roses were no where to be seen. There was a fire in the middle of the circle of trees. It was still night time. Fluttershy was whimpering. Applejack guessed thats what woke her up.

Tally Mark and Quil stepped out into the clearing.
"Hello girls. How are you doing this fine night?" Tally Mark asked. Quil grinned.
"MMPH MHHHPPP FFTT!" was all Applejack could mutter.
Tally Mark laughed.
"You'll be first then?" Quil inquired. Applejack glared at the poetry pony. "It's a shame to see you fine ponies go. But what must be done, has to be done. Right, Rarity?" She smiled a genuine smile. Rarity didn't return the smile. She only glared in disgust at her new 'friend'.


Woofia hopped out into the clearing and bit off Applejacks ankle bounds, and her gag stayed in her mouth. Bumble Bea buzzed into the clearing and looked at the ponies sadly. She mouthed the words "im so sorry." and Buzzed off again. She never wanted anything to do with these sort of things. Gwen stepped into the clearing and helped Woofia pin Applejack down. They tied her legs to a stick and picked her up by lifting the stick.

"Goodbye dearie!" Quil said. "Have fun, girls!" she added.

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They carried Applejack to another small clearing, except this one had machinery. Small contraptions. One was just a table with tools. Woofia hooked Applejack up to one of the machines. Placinga  tube in her mouth, and strapping it there. Placing her in a hole in the ground, with her hands and feet tied. The tube sticking from her mouth led to another machine. Filled with something clear and yellow at the same time, a bit green.

Applejack thought it was just some sort of nasty liquid. She decided to take it on.

Gwen turned on the machine. The liquid poured into Applejacks mouth.
Her throat burned and her mouth started to bleed. Peices of her cheeks started falling off, revealing teeth and bone. She was drinking acid. There was a hole in her stomach now, and her stomach and other guts started falling out. Applejack couldn't scream with the tube in her mouth so she wept instead. The acid that dripped from her open cheeks and belly dripped onto her feet, and burned peices of skin off there as well. Woofia barked and laughed.

"So so so funny! So funny!" Woofia chirped out. Applejack's eyes rolled back into her head, fainting because the pain was too much to bare.

A few moments later the hole in her stomach was so big that everything in her stomach fell out. She was dead. Woofia turned the acid on high to get rid of the rest of the body. She watched it burn and disolve, all but the delicious bones. Bones that Woofia would get to chew on. Gwen scoffed at Woofia.
"Your such an animal." Gwen walked away from that clearing to let Woofia finish her buisiness. Woofia let the acid drain into the dirt, and used some ropes and things to get the bones out and put them in water. She later got one out and chewed on it. Loving the taste of them, she thought 'This applejack chick is tastey..'

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Back at the clearing Quil and Tulip were untying Rarity. Putting a bag over her face for position purposes, dragging her from one clearing to another. Where another ditch with another machine laid. They threw Rarity in the ditch. Quil hopped in it and chained Rarity to the bottom of the ditch.

"Is this all? A ditch? Do you honestly think dirt would be enough to hurt me?" Rarity nervously said. Inside her was pride, but she dared not show it.
"No my dear. I'm very sorry for this, you were a wonderful pony of conversation I might add. Toodle Oo." Quil climbed out of the ditch and turned on the machine, that immediatly started grinding up pigs, and other small creatures, along with the remains of the last town they 'breezed through'. The bits and peices werent too crushed up, so there was an eye here a bone fragment there. The odd mixture started to pour into the ditch. Rarity scoffed.
"a mud bath, honestly?!" She saw an eyeball float pass her, along with some hair she recognized as one of her older fashion companions from older times. "I-I no...Oh my.."

Tulip watched in curiousity as the liquid rose to Rarity's waist.

Quil sat down and watched as well.

"No please! Please oh please! I beg of you! I-I'll do anything!" Rarity's words became muffled as the liquid washed over her mouth a bit. "EEUUGH!" She yelled in disgust. She had swallowed a peice of hair.

The mixture rose over her head, and her hooves flailed wildly, she tried to use her magic to get free, but when she finally broke the chain with magic, she had drowned.
"Done with that one, Tarry." Quil flipped her hair. "Dispose."
Tulip nodded and pressed the cement button on the machine, immediatly after a huge amount of cement filled the hole. Right to the top. After that she threw dirt all over the top of the wet cement, so it would stay there.

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Tally Mark and Becky untied Twilight, whom was at the moment trying to use magic. Becky held down her body by sitting on her back, and Tally starting kicking at her horn. It splittered and cracked, and Twilight's muffled screams made Pinkie Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash queesy. Tally Mark finally had broken off the horn. It flew at a tree. Twilight's head bled out.
"I don't care much for this one, dispose of her in the fire." Tally Mark said.
Becky oblidged and tied Twilight to a stick, and held her over the fire with two other strong sticks.

Twilight's fur was singed off, and her skin started to boil, peices of it getting so burnt they fell off. Bone was exposed and her screams intensified. Her head still bleeding purfusely. Becky lowered the sticks. Fire licked at Twilight's sides, burning off her cutie mark on one side, revealing tender muscle underneat. She was almost cooked well done. She remained alive, because of the blood loss being little to none, and her injuries only being burns. By now she was a lump of red black and purple mass on a stick.
She closed her eyes for the last time.

"There we are." Becky kicked over one of the sticks, making Twilight's dead body fall into the fire. It burned to a crisp. Fluttershy wept to herlself, and she would have thrown up have she watched it. Just the smell was enough to hurt her soul inside.

the Black Roses left the clearing to do something for a minute. Bumble Bea buzzed into the clearing.
"I-I'm  gonna set you guys free!" She landed and trotted over to Rainbow Dash and untied her leg. Rainbow Dash immediatly kicked Bumble Bea in the face. Bumble Bea toppled over and felt her bloody nose.
"MMFT PFFT FMMT!" Rainbow Dash yelled, kicking her free foot at Bumble Bea.
Bumble Bea's eyes watered, as Becky stepped back into the clearing.
"Bea, what are you doing?! You silly filly. Don't mess with those ponies. Let me take care of your nose, cmon now, I'm sure Quil has some stuff, my magic will help too."
Bumble Bea knew she would get in immense trouble for trying to break a prisoner free, but she was still a filly, and just wanted someone to hug and cry on their shoulder.
She followed Becky to find Quil.

Tally Mark and Gwen Guitar came to get Rainbow Dash. Rainbow's free leg made it difficult, but grabbing her by the wings made her cooperate. They took her to a huge machine next to where the one where Applejack was poisened. Woofia was still chewing on the bones.

Rainbow Dash looked away from that scene. Gwen and Tally Mark tied Rainbow Dash by her wings and feet. Both her front hooves were attatched to the top part of the machine. Both her back hooves attatched to the bottom. And her wings were attatched to some chains.

Gwen flipped a switch with a grin on her face. Tally Mark laughed.

Rainbow Dash felt a slight tug. Then RIIIIIPPPPP, her wings her torn off from the back, taking a length of her skin with them. Rainbow Dash relieved herself while she screamed. Yellow liquid dripping down her feet. Then at her hooves another slight tug, then they started getting pulled harder. Her middle fur and skin started to tear at the tugging. She tried not to scream at this. But failed. her middle showed muscles now, skin completely gone due to the stretching. Her ankles and wrists hurt like hell, and one by one they broke. Her legs had also started to stretch out, leaving the knees completely skin-less. Gwen punched the lever and the tugging stopped.

"Your not the best Rainbow. You never were. Your so... proud." Tally Mark said, punching the lever again.
"I WAS NEVER THIS PROUD! AAAAHHGHGG!! DAMN! NOT PROUD ENOUGH TO KI-" Rainbow Dash's middle tore, and her guts were stretched so she looked like an accordian. Gwen turned off the machine and it let RD go. Gwen threw her remains in the acid ditch that Applejack was in, and she started to fizzle.

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Bumble Bea was slapped, for helping a prisoner. But her nose was fixed. She definatly wanted to save one of the prisoners, or both in this case. Fluttershy was so nice. And Pinkie pie didn't deserve to die. Bumble Bea had gauze around her nose, and she walked to the clearing again. She saw Woofia untying Pinkie Pie.

"Hey-alp me here, will yah Bea?" Woofia never remembered that Bea hated all of this. She had to help, so she didn't get in trouble again.

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Pinkie Pie's hair was tied by a rope to a machine, her tail too. A long hose in her mouth. Woofia turned on the machine and the hose splurted helium into Pinkie's mouth. She had no choice but to breath it in.
Her hair and tail were being pulled out. But so was her skin.
Patches of skin were pulled out along with hair. And finally she was left with a skinless scalp, her face stained with blood and tears. She couldn't hold open her eyes, because the helium made her feel funny. Her tail was ripped off at that moment as well.
Her cutie marks taken with it, along with half the skin on her back.
Her stomach started inflating. and her skin started ripping. You could clearly hear her ribs cracking because of the expansion. Her stomach splurted out of her belly and floating by intenstines, like a balloon.
Woofia laughed at the sight, but Bumble Bea had to barf behind a tree.

Pinkie Pie was also thrown in the acid ditch.
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Bumble Bea had gotten back to the clearing, and was untying an unconsious Fluttershy. She fainted from fear. Bumble Bea wasn't nearly strong enough to lift her out. Tulip saw Bumble Bea and put Fluttershy on her back.
She wanted to help.

Bumble Bea and Tulip ran and flew as fast as they could, Fluttershy still tied and gagged in case she screamed or flailed her hooves.

Tulip and Bumble Bea got out of the forest, and ran toward a building. They got inside and the lights were out. They turned them on to see Tally Mark. She stood there with a grin on her face.
"I knew you two would crack. You just a young filly, and you such a coward." Tally chuckled to herself. "cmon now, enough games, gimme back the pony." Tally Mark stepped forward.

Bumble Bea stood in front of Tulip, who still held a unconsious Fluttershy.

"no! I'm sick of it! It's d-disgusting Tally!" Bumble Bea yelled.

"Shh, shh little filly. Why your just a bit younger than those three fillies we saw yesterday, aren't cha?" Tally smiled, trying to look nice.

"B-but...no I-.." Bumble Bea was confused.

"OH SHUT THE FUCK UP TALLY MARK!" Tulip screamed.

Bumble Bea and Tally Mark looked at Tulip like she was the most insane thing they have seen in their life, of course that isnt true.

"Tulip.. Please. Your my oldest friend. You have to understa-"
"JUST SHUT UP, TALLY!" Tulip screamed in between sobs. "You ..You were never my friend. I felt bad for you. That's all.." Fluttershy woke up and screamed and kicked, falling off of Tulip.

"Come on, Tulip." Tally Mark got closer. "you cant resist me."

"w-well I-" Tulip began. Tally Mark looked shocked. a unicorn horn sticking out of her chest. She fell to the floor. Bumble Bea stood behind her, weilding Twilight's horn, and her eyes watering.

"Bea..." Tulip smiled.

"Tulip...we...we have to go." With that, they took Fluttershy and left that town. Fluttershy was let back to her house to collect her things, but they didn't have much time. They left in a hurry and were never heard from again.


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Woofia is still a cannibalistic murderer.
Gwen started a band afterward.
Quil is a famous poet.
Tally Mark was given a funeral, as well as the other ponies deceased.
Tulip raised Bumble Bea to be a nice pony.
Fluttershy lived with Tulip and Bea.
Becky owns the library that Twilight left behind.
Note:
I do not hate any of the canon ponies, nor do i own them

PLEASE NO HATE COMMENTS LIKE:

"OMGGEEE RAINBOW SO COULD HAVE GOTTEN AWAY!!!#!3141414314363"

or

"WHY DID YOU KILL PINKIE?! SHE CAN KILL YOU WITH HER PINKY FINGER!"
ponies dont have fingers.

Im sorry if you dont like gore or horror, and ill be making more regular fanfictions. with these characters.

Also these characters ARE NOT actually murderes. Except for Tally Mark.
She really is. The others aren't.

I just like horror stories.

RD FS Twilight Rarity AJ PP CMC & Spike (C) Hub Hasbro and MLP

Quil, Woofia, Bumble Bea, Becky Books, Tulip Tarry, Gwen Guitar, Tally Mark. (c) me
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